Echo's crappy poem! =D I'm proud of my poem ¬_¬
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He sits in his room for hours on end
He’s got his guitar, a Gibson Les Paul
He won’t leave it alone – his only friend
His parents fight, his mother’s a drunk
He’s tried to commit suicide
‘Cos that kid – he’s junk
‘He ain’t no good’
He’s heard people say
But that kid – he thinks
How do you get love that way?
His parents fight, his mother’s a drunk
He’s tried to commit suicide
‘Cos that kid – he’s junk
He writes songs about corporations
He talks of war and hate
Can’t live up to the expectations
Of cats like Hendrix & Lennon
He wrote a song for a girl he liked
She heard him out but laughed in his face
How that boy cried that night
Into the pillow he desperately embraced
His parents fight, his mother’s a drunk
He’s tried to commit suicide
‘Cos that kid – he’s junk
He took his guitar and he sat in his room
There’s nothing out there but sad and gloom
Writing songs for the girl he loves
His heart ain’t been broken enough
His parents fight, his mother’s a drunk
He’s tried to commit suicide
‘Cos that kid – he’s junk
And that girl he likes
She thinks he’s weird
She thinks he’s strange
She don’t give a damn if he can’t change
His parents fight, his mother’s a drunk
He’s tried to commit suicide
‘Cos that kid – he’s junk
His father hits him with a belt
‘Cos he chose music over sports
‘You ain’t nothin’ but junk’
His mother comes in, surprise! she’s drunk
He goes upstairs into his room
His guitar lies on the bed
He plays it one last time
That boy – he’s dead
He hung himself from the ceiling
From a noose made of rope
He sang his last tune, that boy
About love and hope
Next to his guitar is a small note
‘I never asked for anything
And I took all you gave
You all had your problems – that I could see
But I just wanted a song written for me’
So my guitar boy
Here is your tune
A song from my heart
I will always love you
His parents fight, his mother’s a drunk
He’s committed suicide
‘Cos that kid – he thought he was junk.
HAPPY POEM!!
DecayingFlower- 10-18-2007
Pretty good, although I'm not a poem person.
Bryantjj- 10-18-2007
Wow, Echo... That's... pretty intense. But, if I may ask, is this about who I think it is?
Teenage Filmstar- 10-18-2007
I have no idea who I think you think it is.....
but it's not about anyone
Bryantjj- 10-18-2007
Okay, I'm glad :) Anyway, Echo, it's a good poem. Intense, yet well writen.
Teenage Filmstar- 10-19-2007
Thank you :)
JamesXXXIII- 10-26-2007
thats very good and i know how hard poems are
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